My pepeha

My Pepeha

This is my Pepeha. It introduces you, your Identity, your river, your mountain and your name and whanaus name lastly but not least were you are from. 

What I did On the holidays

On the holiday

My Recount On Our Trip To Stardome

On Thursday the 2 July I wrote a recount on our class trip to Stardome. Before I wrote my story I made a plan. This is my plan.

      

 And now I am going to show you my writing my writing might be quite big but I will fix it.

Tuesday 23 of June 

It was a fine morning in June. Tuesday the 23 of june is our class trip to stardome.I couldn't wait so straight after I woke up I ran to my brother's bed and shook him. I was so eager to go to school. Our class is going to Stardome with another class, their name is room 2. We are going to Stardome to learn about Matariki. Matariki is the Maori New Year. It is a time to forgive and forget.

When I came to school I was so excited that I told everyone that we are going to Stardome and all they said was We're already know. Before we got ready to go to the hall so we could have breakfast our teacher introduced our group helpers names and which group were in.

At morning tea it was quite empty but there was room 1, 2, 6 and 9 that stayed at school. Some of my friends were gone but all I did was run all over the school and played in the bushwalk. After the bell had gone I ran to class because I didn’t  want to miss the bus but then I realized we were going at 12:30. The other rooms went at a different time, like room 7 went with room 8 before morning tea, room 9 and 1 went after morning tea, our class went with room 7 last.

When it was time to hop on to the bus our teacher counted us as we went to the bus. She said to fill in the back seats so that the teacher and the adults can sit at the front. On our way to stardome we took a shortcut through the houses. 

At Stardome we went into a room where a lady told us all about things in space and how we got to see Matariki and other planets and stars. They used a telescope that is in space. The name of the telescope’s name was Habblo. After that the lady gave each parent helper and teachers an ipad there were so many facts that are on the walls so she said we have to find 7 answers for the 7 questions.

My best part was when we had to do the activity because after my group was done there was a big tablet so we played games on it until we had to pack up.

Our Matariki Trip To Stardome

Our Class Trip To Stardome

On Tuesday. Our class went  to Stardome. Stardome is a place in one tree hill. Inside Stardome there are some Lego blocks. The Lego was made into spaceships and are on display in Stardome. We also met a lady. I forgot her name but at least i did not forget the questions she asked us. 

                                                     

My canva poster.

Here is my dance party I made on dance code orge

My toolkit slides.

Here is my toolkits slide hope you have a good time reading it. bye.

Hoped you enjoyed it. Now here is my Canva poster. 

My profreading writing

Kia ora
Hi my name is Sharmake

Today my class and I did a proofreading example as a class. The writing at the bottem is my own profread writing.




                                                                          The Builders

It was a humongous house they built by using Lego. The three brothers names were Ben, Henry, and the baby, he did not have a name so they just called him Baby. They were the first people to build a house out of Lego, and felt proud of their hard work. When their little brother was wrecking the ladder that they made from Lego.

Ben got angry, so he growled the baby, ‘he’s just a little kid” said a tiny voice. “Who said that?” whispered Ben scaredly “I did” came a little voice from behind the gigantic house. It was half-built but already it looked bigger than the universe.

The Brothers quietly tiptoed to the corner of the house, and you won't believe what they did?. when they saw what was making the noise they just stood there jaw dropped, it was a tiny yellow, cute little animal. Suddenly after what seemed like hours [when it was five secconds], Ben said “you look cute” then there was a loud rumble and then boom! the tiny creature turned into a big monster it was so big I don't know how to say how it looks.