I was a student at Hay Park School and this blog is where I shared my learning.
Tuesday, January 5, 2021
SLJ-Summer sound
Hi Followers
Today I made a Google doc and wrote a poem. The poem was about summer sound. The Best part was writing this post. The Trickiest part was when I wrote the poem.
Kia ora Sharmake. Awesome poem. I really like your choice of verbs like whispers and sway. Did you think about making a Screencastify of you reading your poem? If you want to make your Google Doc larger on your blog you can watch this video
It’s Charlotte here, a commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. You have done some amazing work on the ‘Summer Sounds’ task!
I notice that you wrote about ice-cream in your poem! I love Ice-cream, I think that it is so refreshing to have in hot weather, what is your favourite food?
I really like how you include a background to your poem! I thought the colour you chose was awesome.
Kia ora Sharmake. Awesome poem. I really like your choice of verbs like whispers and sway. Did you think about making a Screencastify of you reading your poem? If you want to make your Google Doc larger on your blog you can watch this video
ReplyDeleteMōrena Sharmake,
ReplyDeleteIt’s Charlotte here, a commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. You have done some amazing work on the ‘Summer Sounds’ task!
I notice that you wrote about ice-cream in your poem! I love Ice-cream, I think that it is so refreshing to have in hot weather, what is your favourite food?
I really like how you include a background to your poem! I thought the colour you chose was awesome.
I notice you have embedded a Google Doc in your blog post. To make it easier to read I recommend copying and pasting the text from the doc.
Use Ctrl Shift V to paste your text into your blog post.
You could also insert an image or drawing
to help readers connect with your text.
Ngā mihi nui
Charlotte
Summer Learning Journey