My name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
I really enjoyed this activity as I like to write my own haiku especially on birthdays and christmas cards.
I like that you introduced the activity and explained what a haiku is and how to write one. I thought your haiku was very cool and fit in well with the summer theme but your syllables were slightly off, you have 4, 5, 5 syllables rather than 5, 7, 5 syllables. Do you want to give it another go and add a couple more syllables to your haiku.
I have also noticed your posts are still drifting off the page. To make sure your Google Slide is the correct size for your blog open the post, click the html button and update the size in the html to width="640" height="380" Here is a screencast to show you how.
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Kia Ora Sharmake,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
I really enjoyed this activity as I like to write my own haiku especially on birthdays and christmas cards.
I like that you introduced the activity and explained what a haiku is and how to write one. I thought your haiku was very cool and fit in well with the summer theme but your syllables were slightly off, you have 4, 5, 5 syllables rather than 5, 7, 5 syllables. Do you want to give it another go and add a couple more syllables to your haiku.
I have also noticed your posts are still drifting off the page. To make sure your Google Slide is the correct size for your blog open the post, click the html button and update the size in the html to width="640" height="380"
Here is a screencast to show you how.
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates