Saturday, September 5, 2020

Under The Bed

 Hi viewers 

Today I made a 3 paged writing the title of the narrative is called under the bed it was made on saturday wich is today if you did not notice and remember to read the small bit in the end.

Under the bed Saturday 5th September Darkness filled under his bed. He couldn't see or hear anything so he took a deep breath and went under the bed. He felt some dust bunnies and some fluff. Then he felt something fluffy, fury like a cat and super warm. What is it, then out of nowhere two yellow eyes shot up like a lightning bolt. In the corner. And “(high pitched scream) ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh” Michael runs back up to his bed and then pulls the covers over his well frozen face. Michael calls for his Mum “Mum” then for his dad “Dad” he starts to cry then he takes another deep breath “It's going to be alright” or is it?. He is wondering what the thing under his bed is. He has so much pressure that he thinks that the thing whatever it is can hear him breathing cycasticly. He thinks it is a creepy monster thing like a bear crossed with a bull that can walk and can talk like a human but the animals shared body parts and were hit by lightning shock balls. Then he remembered that he is the bravest in his class and he has a phone so he called the Police.they were two Officers, one was skinny and short but the other one was strong and tall so he asked the short one" When the Police arrived they talked about how monsters aren't real but when Michael was starting to be persuaded he asked the Officers why don't you take a look thy were, why not take a look then you wouldn't to be so sure about that". So the short Officer bent down took his small black torch and shone it in the dark all he saw was a few dust bunnies then he saw something black he took out his Baton and poked it the thing looked at him in the eye for a few seconds then it dashed out from the bed and leaped onto his chest it made a hissing sound so the tall Officer called the animal management they came quickly as they could "what's the emergency?" they said "There on the floor," said the tall officer on the floor, the short officer was tackling two the animal management, a stray cat, so the animal management got the city by its legs with the help of the Officers and locked it up in a cage. It was then taken to the wild and set free. The small officer was treated and he was left with bad scars.

 Sharmake 

 *The gender of the officers is optional and the name refers to any gender.

2 comments:

  1. HI Sharmake,
    I read your story and I loved the story. Some of the sentences were quite long and you would run out of breath reading it. Maybe next time you can check your sentences and your spelling. Was it really a 3 page writing?

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  2. Hi Neha
    Yeah you could even copy and paste it on a document but don't do that really dont do that.

    Sharmake

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